Fic: Earth (SGA, G)

[mific.livejournal.com]

Title: Earth
Author: mific
Rating: G
Pairing: John Sheppard/Rodney McKay
Word count: 210
Warnings: Post-apocalyptic fic, but no AO3 warnings apply.
Prompt: Taken from SGA Saturday, and a writing technique prompt on tumblr.
Summary: They survive.
Notes: A brief starter while I finish my main fic for the challenge.
Link to fic post: on the AO3

Comments

[dreigiau.livejournal.com]

I love the challenge you took upon yourself here, and I think you succeeded very well in fulfilling it. As the sentences shorten, each word gains more weight and significance until you're only left with "Earth". I liked that a lot! Fit well with the overall apocalyptic and melancholic feel.